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You And Me


Author: Hip-Hop Honey
ASL Info:    16/f/canada
Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 105 /86 /31
Words: 164
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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This is a poem about a reaccuring dream I have about Mylo...Anyways hope you like it


You And Me



She tells me
"Theres someone at the door for you"
And at the time I had no idea it would be you
I run down the stairs to open the door
To see you face for once and for all
A suprised look takes my face
Tears start to fall
Our moment of silence was golden
Until we met in each others embrace
Thats when I was in heaven
I knew everything I believed in was for real
You were finally here with me
That's when you whispered to me
"I'm here and I'm never going leave"
The thing I have been dying to hear
Under the cold winter sky
With a gleam in your beautiful brown eye
You kiss my soft lips and tell me
"Everything is finally alright"
Thats when I wake up with a smile on my face
And say to myself
"Theresno need to cry everythings alright"
Because I always dream of such things
Like you and me




Submitted on 2006-02-19 23:05:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i dont who mylo is, but this write is pretty good. a few errors here and there, but over all, it has a good feel to it.
"To see you (your) face for once and for all"
"I'm here and I'm never going (to) leave"

besides these, the imagery was beautiful and very straight forward. nice job
| Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by onepieces | [ Reply to This ]
  This was very good. You've really grown at writing thriugh this site I'm really glad u stuck with the site. I hope things with u and Mylo work out cuz don't like the other guy lol that shall remain nameless. Keep it up u r getting so muchbetter.

=Logan=
| Posted on 2006-02-20 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]


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