You And Me
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This is a poem about a reaccuring dream I have about Mylo...Anyways hope you like it
You And Me
She tells me "Theres someone at the door for you" And at the time I had no idea it would be you I run down the stairs to open the door To see you face for once and for all A suprised look takes my face Tears start to fall Our moment of silence was golden Until we met in each others embrace Thats when I was in heaven I knew everything I believed in was for real You were finally here with me That's when you whispered to me "I'm here and I'm never going leave" The thing I have been dying to hear Under the cold winter sky With a gleam in your beautiful brown eye You kiss my soft lips and tell me "Everything is finally alright" Thats when I wake up with a smile on my face And say to myself "Theresno need to cry everythings alright" Because I always dream of such things Like you and me |
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| i dont who mylo is, but this write is pretty good. a few errors here and there, but over all, it has a good feel to it. "To see you (your) face for once and for all" "I'm here and I'm never going (to) leave" besides these, the imagery was beautiful and very straight forward. nice job | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by onepieces | [ Reply to This ] | This was very good. You've really grown at writing thriugh this site I'm really glad u stuck with the site. I hope things with u and Mylo work out cuz don't like the other guy lol that shall remain nameless. Keep it up u r getting so muchbetter. | =Logan= | Posted on 2006-02-20 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ] | |
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