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    dots Submission Name: I Keep Choosing...dots
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    Author: Kersofmia
    ASL Info:    19/m/Mia
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 111/84/44
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 195
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       This was written at a time in my life when I needed to make change but old habits die hard...


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    dotsI Keep Choosing...dots
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    The wind keeps blowing, while life is always moving and growing,
    Where do I stand in all this, I'm tired of these clenched fist,
    I'm so tired of always being pissed, and I can write a list,

    The never knowing, and fate never showing, is what really keeps me going,
    Maybe pessimistic, anorexic, just plain sick or am I being realistic?
    That's what I think, I think in my mind I'm trying to link,
    Reality with fantasy, and me I'm trying to be, a little more then what you can see,

    But it's hard; I want to see the future like tarot cards,
    At times I feel torn, and others reborn,
    Are these delusions? Or could it be confusion?
    These second guesses, and endless amount of questions,
    Leave a tornado of ideas, that make me feel like my life is being peeled,

    My soul follows my body down the trail, to make sure I never fail,
    But in due time everything happens for a reason,
    And no matter what life will continue changing like the seasons,
    So I should take the good with the bad, never think about the past or what I had?

    But I ask is there a purpose or solution, to why I keep looking for a way to clean the pollution?
    The pollution of this life that I keep choosing...




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    ||| Comments |||
      Another nice poem, I like the flow of this one It doesn't follow a particular rhyme scheme but still as you are reading it the words just flow it is a very nice read.

    I really like the darkness and questioning tones about it. Looking deep inside for the answers but they are not always there, it gets aggravating.

    -Kapone-
    | Posted on 2006-02-20 00:00:00 | by Kapone | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, I can definitely relate to this, yeah, there's no way I couldn't lines like these...

    But it's hard; I want to see the future like tarot cards

    These second guesses, and endless amount of questions,
    Leave a tornado of ideas, that make me feel like my life is being peeled,

    The never knowing, and fate never showing, is what really keeps me going

    ...Stood out the most to me. See, I have to go to counselling for anxiety disorder, so I can relate to this poem very, very much. Thank you so much for posting, even though we might not have the same problems or whatever, you helped me to realize I at least don't feel alone.
    | Posted on 2006-02-20 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]



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