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    Author: mercywraith
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 4/4/3
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 123
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        Anything is welcome. I am looking to develope my poetic voice, so even harsh critisicm is welcome, if it is justified.


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    Searing Of The Souls

    If just for a single second of time
    I could reach out (to touch you) with my words, To
    Haunt you with soft, breathy kisses
    Playing over your flesh,
    If I could drown myself in your eyes
    I would never come up again for breath!
    I would be sated in the depths of your soul,
    I would bathe you in the oceans of my spirit
    And kiss you dry…
    I would bedeck you in droplets of reddest wine
    And kiss each red diamond drop up
    With a swish of my tongue...
    I would rub the finest oils into your skin
    To make your flesh shiny and sweet to the palate,
    I would let you paint me with your oils and pastels
    Pastures between my thighs,
    Flowers blooming upon my stomach...
    I would sing songs to you I never knew I could sing
    But would somehow seem like I knew forever.
    And we would embrace like this my love,
    Till exhausted from the depths and heights of passions,
    Knowing our souls have touched
    And came away seared together.




    Submitted on 2006-02-21 00:24:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is an excellent poem.you should definently express yer poetic voice more often.i liked this one, one of the best i've read today.good job.keep writing.
    | Posted on 2006-02-21 00:00:00 | by LostInYerTears | [ Reply to This ]
      this is crazy. Gosh man? why did you write this? are you really crazy and have problems about something. It had no effect on me it was just stupid.
    | Posted on 2006-02-21 00:00:00 | by twotroubledteen | [ Reply to This ]



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