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    dots Submission Name: Ode To The Crypticdots
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    Author: mercywraith
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 4/4/3
    Words: 231
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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        This peice actually felt good to write, to get out, the honesty and truth of it. Comments welcome.


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    dotsOde To The Crypticdots
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    Ode to the Cryptic

    It is beautiful to me how
    Thoughts of you fit into my shadowed spots,
    Blending into me smoothly,
    Rising and falling into and upon me like
    Deep and calming breaths,
    Held like a light in my chest,
    Over flowing my heart and senses
    With dehibilitating passions…

    I can feel your energy shift the atmosphere
    Of the room, soon after your entry.
    Everything’s more serious and yet
    I feel calm with you, safe.
    Subtle cryptograms spoken on a whim
    Does it mean anything my friend?
    Or is it simple banter?
    Moments weave into your laughter
    I catch your soul shining, I witness
    The sun coming up in your eyes, and I fall,
    I Fall,
    Never to be seen again.

    I have never spoken a word to you
    Though I may suspect you intuit quite well,
    It’s an intimate dance of silence,
    A message only so strongly held behind the eyes,
    It’s the movements of your body
    Rising and falling in silence,
    Ebbing and flowing within the energy
    Symbiosis without a word…
    Held like a breath of the Holiest air
    Capturing this essence in a spiritual capsule
    To medicate my eternal soul.




    Submitted on 2006-02-21 02:39:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the title to this piece very much, just continue to challenge yourself to become better and better as a writer. No matter how good a poet is there is always room for improvement.
    | Posted on 2006-02-21 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]



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