Chances

Author: MysterydarkPoet ASL Info:    20/f/Aust Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173 Words: 72

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Chances

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The heart anguishes With the heads mistakes The price is paid With nothing to spare The body desires Fictional feelings The beggar pleads But nothing’s to give The skeleton man Tortures the soul People want answers None are to confess Intellect blindfolded Guessing its way Innocence is charged When guilt is dead Love taken for granted Leaves a hole Asking for chances Every single one is used

Submitted on 2006-02-21 03:59:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Kind of dark? I like the dark ones! Anyway this was well writen and I hope to read more from you? Thanks for the read . Kelley

| Posted on 2006-02-21 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]

im not really sure the first line makes sence but that whole stanza is really power full i dont get the skeliton man but the last line of that stanza was really cool to...u have a nice vocabulary intellect thats like well idk intelectual lol ... Trevor...~

| Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]

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