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Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 72
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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The heart anguishes
With the heads mistakes
The price is paid
With nothing to spare

The body desires
Fictional feelings
The beggar pleads
But nothing’s to give

The skeleton man
Tortures the soul
People want answers
None are to confess

Intellect blindfolded
Guessing its way
Innocence is charged
When guilt is dead

Love taken for granted
Leaves a hole
Asking for chances
Every single one is used

Submitted on 2006-02-21 03:59:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Kind of dark? I like the dark ones! Anyway this was well writen and I hope to read more from you? Thanks for the read .
| Posted on 2006-02-21 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  im not really sure the first line makes sence but that whole stanza is really power full i dont get the skeliton man but the last line of that stanza was really cool to...u have a nice vocabulary intellect thats like well idk intelectual lol ...

| Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]

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