What is Love? by Kersofmia

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Author:	Kersofmia
ASL Info:	19/m/Mia
Elite Ratio:	5.51 - 111/84/44
Words:	81

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	320
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	467

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This is actually the first poem I ever wrote when I was about 14. I was questioning because it seemed like such an easy word to say in grade school but I wondered if anyone knew what it really was. I still very much enjoy it I hope you will too.

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What is love?
Is it something you seek
like a sacred dove,
or does it make you weak
at its climax or peak?

Does it take your life,
or does it leave you with a loving wife?
I dare not define,
because it changes with every different mind.
Can it be lost when it is so hard to find?

Does it put you in a bind,
or do you have control?
What is love and how would you know?

Submitted on 2006-02-21 07:28:37 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Damn, and thats all i can say cuz i'm [censored] speachless.
| Posted on 2006-12-13 00:00:00 | by Silenced poet | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a real gd poem... I know which I am lol
| Posted on 2006-05-04 00:00:00 | by Henry666 | [ Reply to This ]
  For this have to be written by a 14 year old is very good. I love to read earlier writes of people and then read more current ones. This was a very godo write indeed. I'm going to go read some more of your work, get an "flow" for you going :) Good job!
| Posted on 2006-02-22 00:00:00 | by nicklacymatthew | [ Reply to This ]
  For it being a poem from your youth, it's quite good. I love to read pieces and then try to guess the sex of the writer.

When poems come out to be about love, and convey a deep interest, I tend to invision a female artist. -As was my mistake in this case.

I commend your sensual approach to love, it's refreshing to read male-driven poetry, I wish more men wrote as you did then.

I'm adding this to my favorites.

Kudos

Raven The Wary
| Posted on 2006-02-21 00:00:00 | by Raven the Wary | [ Reply to This ]
  am not pulling u down or what, but there is a line that just does not fit (to me)-or does it leave you with a loving wife?- i mean this ought to have something better other than a forced rhyme. by the way at times u do not really need rhyming words, as long as the rhythm is there. but i like the subject of course( who does not?)

another line was -ike a sacred dove- cdnt it be for example, something u gotta have... i mean..

however i agree about the climax and weakness at the same time, i read a quote saying that to love it to be vulnerable. good poem but i think u can make it better. go for it.
| Posted on 2006-02-21 00:00:00 | by nevender | [ Reply to This ]
   I have written my own takes on love including A Silent Fall From Broken Wing which you can take a look at if you want and since I have not had great experiences with love my own views tend to lean toward the more negative side of your inquiry. This is a very good write. You could actually make a few poems branching from this one. Great I am glad I read this one.
| Posted on 2006-02-21 00:00:00 | by SonAsylum | [ Reply to This ]

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