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    dots Submission Name: what is love?dots
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    Author: submarine
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 128/91/45
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Misc/What is
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    dotswhat is love?dots
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    What is this thing they call love,
    can u understand it?
    Why do they say its better
    to have loved and lost,
    when in the end you'll only end up hurt.
    Is it love only when your happy,
    or will it still be when your heart is breaking?
    Does the pain mean you still love,
    or is it the outcome of a stupid mistake?
    Wat of all the tears that stain your pillow,
    does it mean your in love,
    Or are they again, just wasted?
    How do you know the real meaning?
    How do you find true love?
    Would you believe wat the world says?
    Or are you seaching something that doesnt exist?




    Submitted on 2006-02-21 12:58:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoyed reading this poem, as it made me feel helpless and out of control...like being in or out of love can do. I do think there could be some more attention to word usage, but the feelings are all there, and that is half the battle. Ciao, Kelly
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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