great write. it was really well written. and interesting...i'm a little confused though.tell me if i'm correct the mirror of perfect is the mirror of death..thats the idea i got from the poem, so i guess its right..it was a unique piece really good flow..liked it..keep up the good work! -Lucy-
wow! i really liked your peice. it had my total concentration right from the start. i actually want more. like where would you hide four thousand peices of reflection of yourself? see u got me thinkin. dont worry though im not a biter. just wanted to let you know i liked your poem. U.R.
well...it was good i would say ..it has some good words ...and bad ones for me so i think you should improve it .. and well your metaphores are very good then .. take care and pace and love! thanks for sharing ..o and if you have time please take a look to my writings .. Victor
i feel the way you feel in this peice...the wording could have been more organized and maybe rhyme??? just a preferesnce...but i like this its how i feel evyday when i look into a mirror...and all the time before now...has been the same way...i feel the pain hun keep writing