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    dots Submission Name: What I Thought The One Was...dots
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    Author: ArtichokeMosher
    ASL Info:    15/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 146/201/81
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 215
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1059



    Description:
       Hmm...this came to me when I was walking to school...


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    dotsWhat I Thought The One Was...dots
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    Into the blazing fire ...
    I begin walking.
    Burried down deep in the mire...
    My heart's still talking.

    I come through the blaze...
    And I see someone waiting.
    Off into the fuzzy haze...
    That someone is staying.

    Chorus:
    I thought that someone was to believe in me...
    But as it ends...
    I realized we would just be...
    Better as friends.

    I don't know how much you were hurt.
    I was beat down.
    My heart now lies burried in dirt...
    Waiting for the world to stop going around.

    I cant walk down the hallway...
    Without my wounds cutting deep.
    As you just threw what we had away...
    My wounds will forever seep.

    Chorus:
    I thought that someone was to believe in me...
    But as it ends...
    I realized we would just be...
    Better as friends.

    Gone...
    Is everything I once had...
    Forgotten...
    Is the life I never had...




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      aww.this is sweet and sad at the same time.I really enjoyed reading it.Not many people put lyrics on here or not many i've seen but good job.I wish i was talented enough to write a song.I really liked.great job.And i hope to read more from you.

    Much Love,
    suicidal_chick
    | Posted on 2006-02-22 00:00:00 | by suicidal_chick | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this a lot. i dont usually read lyrics but this was good the title got me. keep up the greatr work... i hope to read more by you soon.
    love
    tina
    | Posted on 2006-02-22 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]



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