That was a great poem! It gave me shivers and ..wow, it was just awesome. Brilliant imagery. I liked your wording and all of your stanzas. It was a short "raise your glass" to death poem. Great job! Its going on my favs! inkpen^
Wow, the way you started out I thought you were gonna talk about some teenager who listens to loud music all up in their bedroom all by their solitary self like me, lol. This was great. Very beautiful imagery. Perfect wording, it was triple "S.", lol short, simple, and oh-so-very sweet. Good job and well done.