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    dots Submission Name: Baby(DJ) I love youdots
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    Author: DrkRomeo_sGirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere in my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 77/75/26
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Comedy
    Total Views: 1159
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 514



    Description:
       This is some thoughts for DJ. lol. at least some of them are.


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    dotsBaby(DJ) I love youdots
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    I think of you everyday,
    I think of you in every way.
    Baby you know its true.
    Baby I love you.

    I think of you in the morning time.
    I think of you at dinner time.
    I know my love is true.
    Baby I love you.

    This poem is so corny.
    Its still makes me horny.
    I dont know what else to write.
    I think im loosing my sight.

    Baby you know I love you.
    I want you.
    Baby I neeed you.
    Baby I love you.




    Submitted on 2006-02-22 18:04:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      teeheehee.
    ha i remember this one.
    it makes me laugh
    sounds like me on sat. nights.
    haha.
    | Posted on 2007-02-06 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      i like that i dont know whay but it made me horny hah lol good job it was corny but hey its still a poem and you gotta respect it.
    | Posted on 2006-03-15 00:00:00 | by crazzybeautiful | [ Reply to This ]
      HAHAHA!! I am so surprised they did not feature this master work. ussually in the poems that someone is just having fun with you will find that they are often featured LOL!!
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]


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