Description: Go. Have fun with your little navy boy. can't wait till he brings you back an std from cruise. sure, he has money now... but what about when he gets out of the service? what then? he'll be broke, while i'll be making bank, while touring as a dimmer tech. yes, i actually have a promising career. so there it is. fuck you. i win. you lose. ha ha. make sure your navy dick saves up cash while he can... the navy retirement plan can't support even one person. get used to living cheep. maybe i can deliver your food stamps in my porsche for you. lol. you aren't too good for anybody.
not that i resent you, or anything
i really like this poem.And you used poetry one of the best ways anyone could.To get your feelings out.And yea most people use poetry for that but some dont.My understanding of the poem is you had a g/f and she broke ur heart to be with someone else.Im sorry you got your heart broke.I know exactly how that feels.I've been through it all.Well i really like this poem. Great job!Well good luck with future poems. Im gonna give you a 5.
Submission Name: Pathetic
