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    dots Submission Name: Nothing Newdots
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    Author: RyukiTZR
    ASL Info:    14/F/-
    Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 133/130/44
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 303
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 401



    Description:
       I guess I'm having a serious writer's block...

    Spare me... (T.T)

    I've got lots of stuff to do in my school now.. it kinda sucks... Think again, I actually like being with my new class. I would really wanna try posting poems and stuff more often.

    I can't think much for now, so I hope this will do.

    The reason why its classified under 'Longing' is cuz I really wish I get can my brains working on poetry etc....


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNothing Newdots
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    I'm that tall...
    And that short.
    Nothing much about me,
    Nothing new.

    Sent to a new school...
    That's all I can say.
    Nothing much about me,
    Just really nothing new.

    The past few days,
    So stuck-up in homework and projects.
    Can't write about an action or something to do...

    So nothing new.




    Submitted on 2006-02-23 09:41:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Such a complete description of most of our lives. Short, to the point, not very descriptive or deep, but it clearly puts words to the way most of us feel. Its a good poem, but perhaps try using more sophisticated words, rather than things like "tall" and "short" find words that better describe exactly what you are trying to say. But its a good poem. keep writing!
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by BreakAndFall | [ Reply to This ]
      a good way to get your brain moving is to read other people's writings and try to wright about a similar subject or experience you can relate to. or write about a past experience that left an impression in your life, or someone, it could be anything. as the last person said, keep writing!! and good luck!
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by onepieces | [ Reply to This ]



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