Description: yes this could be expanded...thus the beginning...
this is the beginning of a great relationship..even if only a friendship, thanks for that Rae.
The Beautiful Beginning -------------------------------------------
thread through your finger tips
enclose your hand in mine
walk with me to the light
as innocence is defined.
I really like this In these short quick words you create a lovely vision in ones mind of a happy couple walking hand in hand not letting anything destry there love Perfectly put If youd like you could expand on this But I would leave it as it is God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
This totally made me remember FF7. Cloud & Tifa, together forever in the land of make-believe... It's beautiful. I love your one or two stanza poems more than your long ones... I don't know why. I just think that they have more strength and severity weighted on the words because there are so few. Whatever the case, I like it.
Submission Name: The Beautiful Beginning
