Description: Just a fun little write, and I think it speaks for itself.
GO for it,
Hot House (revised) -------------------------------------------
Blueberry Mary
round juicy
to squeeze is to PoP!
Bees static clinging your ovi
objectified -
You make a possessor’s life sweeter.
When you age
they will pluck
your sisters
telling you
you are perfectly ripe
for the 4-H pavilion.
Should you
burst,
explode well.
I'm with Graeme, this was just kinky enough to keep my attention. You have awesome way with words...keep it up. I like the way you blended science and sex...nice.
This is definately an interesting write. I feel kinda dirty commenting on it. I had to look up FFA. I'm not much of an agriculture buff. The piece definately has good sounds "Bee's static clinging your ovi objectified" Very nice work! I'll probably be coming back to this one. Shhh just don't tell anyone. Nicely
Submission Name: Hot House (revised)
