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    dots Submission Name: PM (Pluralized)dots
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    Author: Cigarz
    ASL Info:    35/M/NH
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 258/183/50
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 226
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 277



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       Curious how everyone will translate the title, and then register the poem. Consider it an exercise;)


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    dotsPM (Pluralized)dots
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    He will flagellate
    while you fornicate.
    You shall emasculate
    what he cannot emulate.
    Should you elucidate
    for him to extricate?
    A chance to evaluate
    before you eviscerate,
    come to annihilate
    his head and evaporate.




    Submitted on 2006-02-23 13:54:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm not sure of this...but I doubt my thoughts could be edited enough for elite standards! I got this stange feeling it has nothing to do with sex...but hey, I'm hoping it does so I feel better about mind trail of thoughts.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm, a clever little word game, nicely done, I did one called "rhymability" and I remember how hard it was to get the neter right.

    You did good with this, and an excellent title! hahahahaha

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't know what Ron read and I'm not at all sure what I read ha but it seems to me we have case of a female hear with a very nasty case of pms,the poor guy i sure feel for him
    adnil
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]
      Cigarz
    In this write I immediately drawn to two people having sex
    In the middle I am drawn to a relationship that has become sour by poor sex
    And in the end You show how ones words can play mind games on his soulmate
    Very Nicely written
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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