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    dots Submission Name: Shinning Down On Medots
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    Author: ArtichokeMosher
    ASL Info:    15/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 146/201/81
    Words: 293
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Lostfriend
    Total Views: 171
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1771



    Description:
       TO ALL I HAVE LOST!!! REST IN PEACE!!!


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    dotsShinning Down On Medots
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    I know there were alot of things left unsaid.
    I think about them now as I lay in bed.
    How many times I could have showed you love.
    Now it's too late as you watch me from above.

    You watch me and you know what I'm going through.
    When I need advice you're the one I crawl right to.
    And even though you're so far away...
    I speak to you in my mind everyday.

    Chorus:
    I know you're shinning down on me from Heavan.
    It's the only thing at this point which I believe.
    I know as I struggle you have faith in me.


    As I lay down and look up at the sky...
    A specific shape cloud catches my eye.
    A shape of a heart takes form in the cloud...
    I look up and a image of your face is found.

    I look and see a halo above your ears.
    Now you live in heaven and you're crying no tears.
    Now you live a good life free of pain.
    Weather always sunny aand never rain.

    Chorus:
    I know you're shinning down on me from Heavan.
    It's the only thing at this point which I believe.
    I know as I struggle you will have faith in me.

    There is an angel watching everything I do.
    This angel corrects all my wrong moves.
    I told them I did everything to make it right.
    They said it's fine and they still shine bright.

    Shinning down on me...
    Shinning down on us...
    They are:
    Stars burning brightly.
    With heart held tightly.
    Friends let go.
    So far away but yet so close...














    Submitted on 2006-02-23 14:59:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hey ...
    i truly understand how u feel...i am in almost the same sitation...i admire the fact that u consider ur dear friend someone who corrects you and guides you even without being present...i think that can definitely be defined as true friendship...so sorry about what happened...take care...
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by mihir | [ Reply to This ]



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