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    dots Submission Name: Too Manydots

    Author: luckyms20
    ASL Info:    16/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 106/105/64
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 756
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 818

       ...This is about how you can't be sitting around waiting for life to happen, it doesn't happen that way. There's far too many wasted moments, and you've only got one life.

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    dotsToo Manydots

    Too many days wasted crying,
    We've got to wipe away the tears,
    The world is moving,
    No more looking back,
    Today is tomorrow,
    Yesterday is already forgotten.

    Too many minutes wasted waiting,
    Nobody's coming,
    We're alone now,
    Lets forget the world,
    Our next minute is this minute,
    Our last minute is already forgotten.

    Too many years wasted hoping,
    Miracles are for the ill,
    No one cares,
    No one's going to saves us,
    Next year is this year,
    Last year is already forgotten.

    Too many days wasted crying,
    Too many minutes wasted waiting,
    Too many years wasted hoping,
    Our futures are now,
    Our past has already been forgotten.

    Submitted on 2006-02-23 16:12:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey ya its really good and it flows really well i wish crap for me would be forgotten but i mean it is so good and keep it up
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by WhErEaMi | [ Reply to This ]
      A favorites add if there ever was one. I love this. Your use of forgotten yesterdays is wonderful. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]
      this is an amazing powerful write. a fav indeed.

    Today is tomorrow,
    Yesterday is already forgotten>>

    i love how you did this
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by thetwilight | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this a lot and i really think a lot of people will be able to relate to this. keep up the great work. i really hope toread more by you soon.
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      it had only like 2 words that took away from it i wont say whitch ones cuz thats cheating u gott find em ur self =p...it was cool it was very emotionfull i could tell and i like the title..

    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]

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