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    Author: darkness
    ASL Info:    19/F/my own world
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 524/218/40
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/I am dead inside
    Total Views: 253
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 319



    Description:
       i feel like shit today....

    and the I am dead inside types crack me up so hur iyt goes...


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

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    when there is no point to life...
    & time creeps by, O so slowly
    those clear memories
    the ones which you hold on to so dearly
    fade....
    as dreams fade
    as thoughts fade
    as people fade
    just as everything in this world fades...

    Then does HOPE fade?




    Submitted on 2006-02-23 18:12:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hope fades but only to a point and then you have to rebuild. Very virtues and demanding of your mind to understand it. Keeping in thought the end. Nice work.
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by deranged shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      well it was kiknd of good i think we write this things when we feel upset or depressed and i guess those times we became more poets than what we are.. so i think you did it good .. and to answer the question in your last line ..
    well hope will never fade away.. it never does.. this is why we still live in this world... and well that is my answer keep writing and thanks for shairng and if you have ptime please take a look to my latest writing i know you would like them and leave a comment please..
    take care
    and peace and love
    have a nice day
    Victor
    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
      i loved the line in the middle...and the ending was cool because who woulda have thought u ever would have capitalized the letter...yeah great!...

    Trevor...~
    | Posted on 2006-03-14 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is great. Its short and bittersweet. A favorites addition. Keep it up. Hope is a cruel joke that ruins lives.
    Loveage,
    Mike
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes hope fades. Then if you don't die life cycles back around and you get a few new good memories and meet a few new wonderful ppl. Wash & Rinse & Repeat
    | Posted on 2006-02-23 00:00:00 | by thetwilight | [ Reply to This ]
      Whoah... I wish I could say more but this is so deep and somewhat courageous it make me feel confused yet distressed. Great Job! I really enjoyed it.

    < Unperfect 3

    Does HOPE fade?
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]



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