Empty breaths fill each pore of my undeserving body.
A smashed hourglass tries to reassemble itself with the counselor.
It seems like everyone's got their problems.
Don't base my plight on the defeated smile I carry.
My emotions are deeper then you think
So intense that I don't think I'll ever catch up with them.
Cracking decisions apologise to the consistancy of my heart.
Wine made from sour grapes pours from my ears to poison you.
I try to resolve what I think is broken
Try to rationalize with fatuous accords.
Oil in a river of inane adoption
He sets afloat the crying wolf
Thinking that the wolf's level of prestige
would keep it above the surface.
An unwise judgment.
The strong authority of the waves crashes down.
Washing ashore the collateral.
No more howls can be heard.
There lies the abandoned morals.
Defective standards and damaged ethics are all thats left.
Are all that can be seen, heard, felt
I disagree with Graeme and Ron I think this is very intelligently written, I think all the themes demonstrate how the person is feeling, there is clearly alot going on in their life and I thought it was detailed beautifully. I liked the ideas you presented, favourites were the idea of waves washing away the collateral. Loved it, I'm adding it to may fav's. I'm Jess by the way :) ~Sunset
This is an interesting write Im sorry but I have to agree with Graeme This write had what seemed to be way to many themes for one write I understand the main theme is writing about the ills in ones life and how they dealt with them But maybe and only if you so desire break up this write into a couple of writes God Bless Ron