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    dots Submission Name: He just left....dots
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    Author: AfricanPrincess
    ASL Info:    21/F/SA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 222/201/31
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
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       someone b as kind to explain to me why a man would do something like this. why for 4months he would smuther u all his got and just someday stop calling...
    Advice plzzzzz


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    dotsHe just left....dots
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    "WORDS INDUCE EMOTIONS"

    he showered me with
    Time
    Affection
    Attention
    Displays of love
    Created romantic moments
    Uttered i love you long before the "right" time
    Shared deep, dark buried secrets of his past with me
    his words induced emotions in me...

    it's been 3weeks and i've heard nothing of him...

    WHY????????




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      You are bring bback a bad memory of last year. Your words are so simply and yet to the point. I apologize that I cannot answer why a man would pull the silent treatment. But as I've heard in the past, the best revenge is to live well and make those who tried to hurt you, fall in their own jealous.

    Minsu
    | Posted on 2006-02-27 00:00:00 | by Lee Minsu | [ Reply to This ]
      You are bring bback a bad memory of last year. Your words are so simply and yet to the point. I apologize that I cannot answer why a man would pull the silent treatment. But as I've heard in the past, the best revenge is to live well and make those who tried to hurt you, fall in their own jealous.

    Minsu
    | Posted on 2006-02-27 00:00:00 | by Lee Minsu | [ Reply to This ]
      Darlin' it seems to me that he had some dark secret that he wasn't letting you in on...and the secret came back home!

    If he's gonna dick you around like that, put it down to experience and leave it. there's plenty of fish in the sea with bait like yours...lol

    Hope you can forget him

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-02-27 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree with Maggie
    Just let him go
    Use the lessons you learned from this romance to better prepare you for the next
    You sound like a loving woman
    Do not let this situation bring you down
    Stay Positive
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Love has a way of being so great, and sometimes, being so down in the dumps. Even thought I am not as old as you, or other on this site, I know what the meaning of Love and have been through it myself.

    I do not know why he has not tried to call or make contact in 3 weeks, which is pretty long for a relationship like yours. I agree with Maggie though. Keep on keeping on, and stay good my friend. Write more poetry as well, Id like to see more in the future ;)
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by irish storm | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow...have you called him or tried to get in touch with him? That's like one of those super wierd things that you think only happen on TV shows, or in books.
    Usually the reasons for this kind of behavior are not good. Anthing I could come up with, is just not something some one wants to hear. It would probably do you a world of good to find out the answers, because even if it's something you'd hate to hear, at least you would have closure.
    jan
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      good thoughts...its nice of you to share that with people...i know what yoy=u are going through...even though not exactly...i can relate. good luck.
    xoxoxo
    me
    p.s.if u want to check my works...please do so
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by 2Numb | [ Reply to This ]
      these were some good thoughts...I feel bad for you but I can't answer that...I don't know what would cause a man to do this...but as much as it hurts...at least try to be open to the thought of moving on? anyway I can relate and I'm sorry for what ur going through or went through...
    peace
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      I will tell you right now let it go. Calling him only makes things worse. If you knew the anwser why, it would still hurt. Just move on like did. You provide closure when you let go of the power this man's leaving have over you. there is reason of course for his actions...maybe now is not the time to know it yet. You are not the only this happened to and you will survive it nontheless.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]


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