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Submission Name: Requiem for the Marquise dots

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Author:	losing_focus
ASL Info:	19/ f/ Georgia
Elite Ratio:	3.09 - 65/97/28
Words:	99

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
Total Views:	224
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Requiem for the Marquise dots

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Requiem for the memory I wish I could forget
Instilled with tears and laughter, but both bespeake regret
I loved you to distraction, my beautiful marquise
But you would keep your heart of stone and leave this girl bereaved
And icy stare, a chilling gaze, your personal aegis
with which to creully strike me down, but I rise again. Pheonix.
Why do you still haunt me? Beryl eyes enslave
my soul destroyed by a mere glimpse of the lethal glare I crave
Lips like supple daggers, every kiss a threat
My late lamented lover whos name I shant forget.

Submitted on 2006-02-24 14:31:40 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Love is a pain in the ass isn't it. Unfortunately I can relate to this write, dont worry you are only 17 years young so you will have plenty of time to find someone that is worth being with you. Just to let you know I live in Riverside, and they have a couple poetry reading nights, so if you live around here maybe you should do some research on the "GRIND". Enjoyed the write, keep it up.
Do you listen to the doors? I would have to guess yes by this writing.
| Posted on 2006-02-27 00:00:00 | by dustinamoody | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice. Had to read 'Readers Digest-enrich your word power' to understand it though... Nice poem the second time through...

Cheers!
:))
| Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by Ravensworth | [ Reply to This ]
  This seems like something I would've written myself..
so of couse I love it! please read some of mine..I will post one similar to this hope you enjoy,also, It's called "wasted" and Iwrote it when I was18..10 years ago.
| Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by Jill Lynne | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this piece alot . keep up the amazing work. i really hope to read more by you soon. keep posting so i can.
love tina
| Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
  i love the way ur "marquise" remained beautiful and cold throughout. not in reality but in the poem. wonderful analogy. eg: "..heart of stone" "icy stare" "beryl eyes" ... great work. ur presently my favorite poet..
| Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by strike three | [ Reply to This ]
  Once again, I stand amazed. Your command of the english language is incredible. I believe you just may restore my faith in the artistic and intellectual sides of humanity. Your style is in this one is much more classic than most of the posts on this site. Personally, I don't like modern poetry nearly as much as I do classical, so poems like this come as a breath of fresh air.
| Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by thor_s avatar | [ Reply to This ]

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