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I Do ft. Unknown Solider


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
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Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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lalala i wrote that like a year ago and i thought it needed a rap sooo that's were troy (unknown soldier) comes in i thinks its but tell me what you think.


I Do ft. Unknown Solider



((Unknown Soldider))
I wanna chick with big tits
gotta have the right hips with some nice lips
when we out in pulblic she's classy
but once i get her home she starts to get nasty
i put in work, constantly keeping her pleased
let her ride on top, our bodies equal 90 degrees
getting hot and hectic as i keep making her moan
she's quick to undress me every time i get home
we start slow: touching, kissing, caressing
but that leads us to bumping, gripping and sweating
I need a little bit more than relationships of the sexual
gotta have a head on her shoulder
i need an intellectual
i want a smart chick with some honest ambitions
and a home cooked meal when i step in the kitchen
no gold diggers i hate an excess of greed
can you be that chick?
Do you have what i need?

((Chours))
and i do
i wanna get close to you
i do
i wanna know what's up with you
baby i do
i wanna hear those nasty things
freaky things i wanna hear you
scream my name

((Danni))
and i do
wanna dude who is hard
but does the sweetest things
wanna dude who will freak me
in his escalade
i wanna dude who is smart
and is getting paid
sharp and doing his thing
knows how to bring good pain

((Ambby))
i wanna dude who will treat me right
i wanna dude who will fight the fight
i wanna dude who is good to me
will hustle for me
and fuck it he gotta be a freak

((Chours))
cause i do
i wanna get close to you
i do
i wanna know what's up wit you
i do
i wanna hear those nasty things
freaky things
i wanna hear you scream my name
(repeat 1x)

((Ambby))
wanna dude
who is a thug has a hiphop style
wanna dude
who always goes and drives me wild
wanna dude
who is buggin yet will keep it cool
takes other homies to the street school
and buys me real expensive jewels

((Danni))
i wanna dude who will treat me right
i wanna dude who will fight the fights
i wanna dude who is good to me
will hustle for me
he gotta be a real o.g.

((Chours))
i do
i wanna get close to you
i do
i wanna know what's up wit you
i do
i wanna hear those nasty things
freaky things, i wanna hear you scream my name
((Repeat 2x))




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  hey everybody! this is amazing! i laugh at troy's first line! i think this will be a pretty good song! well ill like to add more! but i cant i hav to go to school now! this was amazing! KEEP IT UP!

~akaila~
| Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  u see that? alcoholcaust wants more of ME! this was really cool y'all. look at y'all with ur little girl group. what y'all think y'all TLC or something. hey danni can be like T-Boz. lol. this was really cool and i'm glad to be a part of it
| Posted on 2006-02-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this but may I make some suggestions?? I think troy should be in there a little more so you can hear more of his expectations. I also think that in the chorus when you said " I wanna hear you scream my name" I think it should rather be " I wanna hear you sreame" With a little oohh, aahh, or what not. This was pretty good. I think that you guys should try to get an album out just so I can hear this song done and finished. GREAT JOB!
| Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by alcoholcaust | [ Reply to This ]
  hi thanx for yor comment i am glad you liked crossroads yor page saz yor 15 i am 44 alittle difference in age

yor post was to the point and i hope whom ever its too appreciates you

thanx sandman
| Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this piece alot . keep up the amazing work. i really hope to read more by you soon. keep posting so i can.
love tina
| Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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