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    dots Submission Name: Help Medots
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    Author: LostInYerTears
    ASL Info:    14/F/Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 85/86/32
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 177
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 866



    Description:
       Um lets see......this poem was made in a dedication of someone in which they should know who they are.anyway tell me what you think about it.


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    help me save me free me
    do something don’t just stand there
    don’t walk away don’t leave me here
    don’t cause me pain
    help me
    you push me away
    like im not worth your time
    save me
    I need you
    why aren’t you here
    why must you leave me
    to disintegrate and rot
    why must you walk further away
    like im not real
    like im not here
    I can feel
    believe it or not
    I need help why aren’t you here
    you said you would be here but your not
    where are you
    im falling away
    free me
    take me from here
    don’t leave me
    I need to be free
    I cant stay here
    help me
    where are you
    please do something to help me
    do something don’t leave me
    don’t walk away
    help me save me free me




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    ||| Comments |||
      lol...I loved the last commetn..."you are not alone!" Jills' comment was to inform you that you must do it yourself,but you are not alone...whatever. Kid understand,first of all this poem is awesome,you have someone there for you at all times you just don't know it.Your Guardian Angel never leaves your side.I never will...if I must die so you know I'm always there so be it.If you truly need help come to me,tell me straight up,don't be quiet about it.I'm there for you...never forget.Anyflip,great write...

    -Leo
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by GuardianAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      I know what and how your feeling but listen and take this with you through life if you will to a 28 year old who has been there and done that...You don't need someone else to make you ok. It is vital to your life to surround yourself with people who care about you and will not let you get in the way of yourself..but at some point you have to do it yourself..I pray that you are healing in expressing this poem and That you can find somewhere inside of you that you really like and hold on with both hands you have got to have your own back...Your poem made me sad.You are not alone!
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by Jill Lynne | [ Reply to This ]



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