Description: Uniqueness is precious. It shines. But sometimes it's lost; and you can't get it back.
I hope you like it. I've had writers block for a long time...I'm not sure about this one. Please tell me what you think.
P.S. The word "Sameness" comes from "The Giver". Its a great book.
Fading into Sameness -------------------------------------------
A slow angelic light ray
That faltered too fast
An insignificant presence
That I couldn't make last
The hands of ghosts from Sameness;
The pulled you right in
And though my tears held acid
I watched your light dim
I carved your name on paper
Trying to create a fantasy
But your scars had disappeared
And found their way to me
Your light eventually faded
I could no longer spot your face
The walls grabbed and held you captive
As my memories took your place
spell check, i've no room to speak, but use it. also i understand the writers block i just started after a while myself. i might change a few words here and there but ultimately it';s very well done, good job
I love the intensity of the words used here. I love the imagery as well as the flow. I was impressed with the walls holding the girl captive line. Sounds like she is gone and all your days are a repeat of the last. Very good title and great poem. I really enjoyed this.