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    Author: ebflannery
    ASL Info:    24/
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 184/184/48
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 176
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Tell me your name,
    only if you want to
    I will listen either way
    So I know your fears,
    What drives you
    The price you are willing to pay
    And we laugh together, shed a tear
    As we hold on to our brew
    I let you glimps my secrets,
    As I buy another one for you
    And throughout the evening
    We will open our hearts
    And call eachother friend
    Say goodbye at closing time
    Never to see eachother again




    Submitted on 2006-02-24 20:46:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this really gave me that warm, slightly hazy feeling you get after a few cold ones in an overcrowded but friendly pub. The kind of night when you find yourself feeling right, laughing and talking life with complete strangers...
    excellent descriptive little piece of writing, captured the essence of a night on the town perfectly. Of course, I'm not sure if that is exactly what you were aiming at but thats how it hit me.
    I can smell the smells, feel the noise and taste the brew now...
    nicely done.

    Milo
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by Milo shanley | [ Reply to This ]
      i like the way you`ve summed up those beautiful fleeting friendships you get over a pint. it struck a chord in a very simple way, which i think adds to it`s charm and also adds a poignancy which you wouldn`t get in a more complex piece. shame sometimes we don`t keep in touch with those great beer buddies!
    cheers!...xx
    | Posted on 2006-03-15 00:00:00 | by the insomniac | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool..

    A night at a pub.. enjoying some drinks and company.. good or otherwise..

    ahhh.. doesnt alcohol just bring people together?

    This is an awesome little poem capturing a moment when two strangers come together just breifly and fleetingly..

    It warms my heart..

    shaun
    | Posted on 2006-06-18 00:00:00 | by shanu | [ Reply to This ]



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