Nice work! Loved the rose image and how it 'bleeds'. Roses are such nice flowers to write about and I think I wrote a piece on a rose garden and how the flowers within harbour so much pain that makes them beautiful and transcendent.
I really liked the image this creates. I liked the similes and metaphors you used. I didnt read ur other ones, but this one was good. You used good imagery. One thing I didnt really like was the repition of my heart/ my rose bleeds. I felt it was a little too much. But overall it was pretty good.