Eureka! This was just like striking gold reading this. I love the way you used the imagery of words filled with dust to expalin the communication problem between the couple. I love the wording and the flow. This was just beautiful. Wow! I can't wait to see your next poem. Let me know when you post it please. Great work!
I like this one To me you are speaking of how words can not only start a relationship but if we are not careful with them they can end one I also believe you were referring to Love being more then just words God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think 'Thank You Ron
It's okay, I just don't really understand what you are trying to convey. I like the word usage of "dust" it seems to balance out some of the more graceful words ("crystal clear") and truly blend together very well.