Damn that Mr. Exciting and the opportunity that he let slip by his hands. I love the line "If she bows to the world would he bow back?" So deep and so full of meaning, it can be intrepreted many ways. I liked this piece a lot, short by your standards, but still as powerful as any of your other works.
AWWWW! That's really all I can say. That was so pretty and so real Andy. Why is it called November love? Were you in love in November? Was it me? Huh? lol j/k. I really really really did love this poem. No joke! Consider it a favorite.
Oh I wonder who Mr. Exciting was? I like this one but I know u have heard that before. It is very short compared to most of your work but no less meaningfull. I wonder about you sometimes because you are so distant and I hardly know what is going on with you anymore. I hope that you have learned something from being in love. I know how much it hurts to have to not be in love anymore.
The poem is hard to understand clearly. The picture is vivid and you definately know that there is something deep and strong about the image you are creating but parts of it are unclear. it isn't a bad thing, it's just an observation. Anyway good job as usual sweeetie and stay solid.
Submission Name: November Love
