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    dots Submission Name: the hooddots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 273
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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    Description:
       as a white boy living in the hood you to do thing people linging in the surburbans don't need to do. this is just a big rant.


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    dotsthe hooddots
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    I am the way I am
    You can't change who I am
    So I don't give a fuck who u think I am
    I am the way I am
    So fuck you society
    So what I live poverty
    So what Iím a asshole
    don't judge me by my looks or my actions, judge me by what write.
    you'll will know what I go though each night
    you'll be like god getting the insight on my life.
    You don't know I have to fight in the streets just because Iím white.
    Each and every night I have twin 40's cock and ready under my pillow for any mother fucker that comes into my house trying to rob my family just turn around and sell it for some crack.
    People don't know what I have to go though
    they never been in the same situation as me having a Nigerís blood on my shoe's because he popped off and said the wrong thing to me.
    I'm starting to think know
    there nothing but a figure of my imagination
    but I know I got that ammunition to blow them Nigerís away.
    It's like basketball if I shoot I better follow though.
    Put one the head, better hope he is dead
    If I miss it's do or die situation
    I better take out each and every one.
    Don't try to change me
    I have to be this way to survive
    I am the way I am
    You can't change who I am
    So I don't give a fuck who u think I am
    I am the way I am
    So fuck you society.




    Submitted on 2006-02-25 21:30:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is 1949 mercury notledmerc
    14 word press is a skin head literature only push for the cause
    they have zines literature etc look it up
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by ledmerc | [ Reply to This ]
      you sound like a whiny [censored] and i see nothing appealing in this piece at all it may be a rant but seriously who cares if we dont know what u have to go through everyone goes through [censored] and livin in the hood aint that bad i lived all over the worst parts of peoria illinois and the only bad [censored] i ever saw happen was happening to people that didnt know how to keep to themselves and out of other peoples business oh and i doubt your little 15 year old ass has killed anyone also you sound like a really [censored]ty eminem and finally this just plain sucks ass
    | Posted on 2006-02-25 00:00:00 | by cartoon autopsy | [ Reply to This ]
      ian stuart would have been proud
    i know whats up man
    14 word press needs a copy
    i agree when you say you dont give a [censored]
    you plain dont
    what im not understanding comrad
    is the whole watching your back crap etc
    you got no future or hope in this [censored] man
    wheres the white children when youre doin 25-l
    i know this is original because i know white punk and literature
    its the truth but watch the 25-l
    | Posted on 2006-02-25 00:00:00 | by 1949mercury | [ Reply to This ]


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