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    dots Submission Name: anomalydots
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    Author: strike three
    ASL Info:    26/m/ethiopia
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 32/39/18
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 192
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 406



    Description:
       just a vent.


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    dotsanomalydots
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    Discover me.
    I am the unfit mutation,
    The anomaly.
    The wingless bee
    In this beehive.
    The untimely genetic variant,
    Too early, too late.
    Imprisoned me
    This virus scan,
    Exposed and defective.
    Clean me this system can’t.
    Clean myself this system’s damned.
    Frame me, hang me,
    Kids point a finger at the anomaly.




    Submitted on 2006-02-26 01:22:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it, but it doesn't let me comment any further. i can't seem to sense a lot of feeling in it, sorry, i hope you're not angry or something. although the last line is kind of strong and reveals an autobiographical note.
    respect,
    j
    | Posted on 2006-02-26 00:00:00 | by ParLon | [ Reply to This ]
      AWESOME vent!!!! "Anomaly" is one of the words I frequently us, and am currently obsessed with! You should try making it longer- I'll like reading it. I's recently thinking of writing a song with the same title!!!
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by Saaber | [ Reply to This ]



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