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Brand new start


Author: Kaila Turley
ASL Info:    15/F
Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 52 /43 /18
Words: 126
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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thie poem is about a girl/boy expressing what the other means to them


Brand new start



you're the angel of my life,
and i don't know what i'd do,
i find myself just thinking...
what would i do without you?

you made me reach for that star,
and i never cared how far,
i love you with all of my heart,
you gave life a brand new start.

you're the meaning of my life,
and i don't know what i'd do,
i sit sometimes just thinking...
i'd be lost if i ever lost you.

you're the reason to my life,
and i don't know what i'd do,
i sit sometimes jsut hoping...
this love we share is true.

don't let this drift away,
distant and apart,
don't take away this chance,
you give life...
a brand new start




Submitted on 2006-02-26 10:30:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  great poem nice a nd raw, full of emotion. maybe make the rhyming flow a little bit more? keep it going also maybe eloborate more
| Posted on 2006-02-26 00:00:00 | by Lewiskane | [ Reply to This ]
  This was a good poem very real emotions, but it was kinda cliché but it had good flow and all that good stuff and the way u add some desciptive words it added a very good flow to it. I am really glad u are using this site to it's advantage I really hope u keep putting stuff on this site it'll help u alot in the end. you are already showing improvement keep it up Kaila

xoxoxoxo
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| Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]


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