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Submission Name: love crap dots

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Author:	WritingPrincess
ASL Info:	15, female, Idaho
Elite Ratio:	2.6 - 3/6/3
Words:	74

Class/Type:	Rant/
Total Views:	235
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	443

Description:
this was actually somehting i had written in school. this kind of thing has actually happened to me. please write what you like to

love crap dots

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like it or not
you're in love
with an angel
from below

his hair is light
like a dove
his eyes shine bright
from HER love

he laughs at you
and likes HER a lot
he gave HER a bear
that YOU had bought

you had bought it for him
to like and enjoy
to realize that you loved him
too bad
he used it for a toy

Submitted on 2006-02-26 13:13:31 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
ummm u kinda just stopped in the middle? i mean i scrolled down to read the rest and there wasnt a rest he bought a bear? that u bought and gave it to her? whitch is u...idk *LOST*

his teeth part also was a bit off some how and is keith a name? b/e i dont know keith...but still its alright as a poem

Trevor...~
| Posted on 2006-05-04 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]
changed it.
| Posted on 2006-07-02 00:00:00 | by WritingPrincess | [ Reply to This ]

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