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    dots Submission Name: My Coping Patterndots
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    Author: bonita2689
    ASL Info:    18/f/in
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 42/58/33
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 191
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 456



    Description:
       Some sort of crazy rhyme scheme I got here... It's like: AABC, DDEF, DGD, HIH...or something... Well don't mind that. I don't know what I was doing. I hope it's not too crazy and scatter-brained...This is how I cope:


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    dotsMy Coping Patterndots
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    Stacatto rantings
    teetering and expanding
    Compose another
    knuckle-braced conviction

    Metamorphic revelations
    drip with the realization
    that freckle-stained stories
    die gracefully where they rise

    Fumbling my indignation
    with the crumpled flutter
    of stipulations

    Relief- my friendly asylum
    spits out veins of warmth and
    tapping claws of silence




    Submitted on 2006-02-26 16:50:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      question...and i apologize if i seem naive or ignorant here...but what is stacatto rantings?? or well...just stacatto

    other than that i love the choice of words you used in thie piece. they went together nicely...i enjoyed it very much...im sorry to cut this short but i have to go..but this is getting added to my favorites
    | Posted on 2006-02-26 00:00:00 | by vintagepepper | [ Reply to This ]



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