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    dots Submission Name: Lou Reed Cooldots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLou Reed Cooldots
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    Babe,
    you're not just cool.
    You're Lou Reed
    circa 1966
    hanging at the Factory with Warhol
    dating Nico
    wearing black sunglasses
    black jeans
    a perfectly distressed leather jacket
    and your nihilism like a crown
    cool.





    Submitted on 2004-05-02 13:12:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      u "walk on the wild side" baby!! that is the second poem u've written on a personality!!! ure cool (lou reed!!!) another great one from u, nothing here to criticise!!

    Zu
    | Posted on 2004-05-02 00:00:00 | by Zu | [ Reply to This ]
      This is probably a horrible idea, but I'd like it if all the words from 'Lou Reed' to 'Crown' had a '-' between them, like 'wearing-black-sunglasses'. In fact, that is a REALLY bad idea, but in my honestly bad taste I would like it. And hey, quit writing poems about, I don't take well to unbridled flattery- Rees
    | Posted on 2004-05-02 00:00:00 | by Black Rock Tractor | [ Reply to This ]
      how about wearing-velvet-under-the-ground-cool? I'm so full of bad ideas its scary.
    | Posted on 2004-05-02 00:00:00 | by Black Rock Tractor | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this, dumplin! everyone was trying to be so cool back then. sometimes i think i was born at the wrong time. i was 7 years old then... but i feel like i was there... and "lou reed cool" is the coolest of them all! you're so cool, dumplin, we're all gonna freeze!! lol! i like this short, cool poem! you haven't lost it at all! keep 'em coming! you know how i like the short ones, too!!
    | Posted on 2004-05-02 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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