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    dots Submission Name: Im Sorrydots
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    Author: LostInYerTears
    ASL Info:    14/F/Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 85/86/32
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Misc
    Total Views: 223
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 785



    Description:
       im going krazy!i dont know if its good or not but ail please let me know wtf you think ok.


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    dotsIm Sorrydots
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    Bang bang
    Shoot me
    watch me cry
    watch me rot
    as I die

    Slash slash
    Slit my vain
    Hold me down
    Cause me pain

    Tie tie
    Tie this rope
    Around my neck
    And watch me choke

    Stop stop
    Stop my breath
    Stop my heart from beating
    In my chest

    Kill kill
    Kill me fast
    Take my life
    Don’t let me last

    Rip rip
    Rip my heart
    Tear my life
    And soul apart

    I’m sorry for what I put you through
    Get yer revenge
    You know you want to
    Kill me
    I cant live knowing I hurt you

    Just kill me now
    Before I do








    Submitted on 2006-02-26 21:38:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ...life sucks...you can't live without hurting the ones you love,I know...but to want to end you life isn't a solution,it's an easy way out...to die without showing that person how much you care...it would have been pointless to even exist.It's a well written poem...never forget that there's always someone there for you no matter how much you hurt them.

    -Always,
    Leo
    | Posted on 2006-02-27 00:00:00 | by GuardianAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      thats cool it rhyms soo beautifully...i like it mucho much. thats totally tight lol. so yah :)
    so like :) o_o uhhhhh
    ~Audrey
    | Posted on 2006-02-26 00:00:00 | by nightxassassin | [ Reply to This ]
      deep stuff dude/dudett i mean wow...
    you got way too much remorse...
    your heart is very soft and you probably cannot take the fact knowing you did wrong twards someone you love...
    dont die...
    the world still has use for u...
    if you are thinking of suicide ask yourself this...
    will anyone care if im dead...
    | Posted on 2006-02-26 00:00:00 | by True Purpose | [ Reply to This ]



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