This Shit's just like Heroin by DontSaveMySoul

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Submission Name: This Shit's just like Heroin dots

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Author:	DontSaveMySoul
ASL Info:	20/m/cali
Elite Ratio:	3.84 - 194/184/42
Words:	62

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	181
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	449

Description:
Dedicated to san frincisco... just got back to my shit hole town from there. coming back was depressing

This Shit's just like Heroin dots

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The rush found
Be it pshcotic street corners
Or tao grooved cafe's
In flowered green parks
Or in decadent dark grottos

The fleeting bliss
Of tourist plagued piers
Or loud locals bars
Of coffee shop intelectuals
Or simple street proformers

Are all so simillar to heroine
With a quick build up
An amazing high
And a slow painful withdrawl

Submitted on 2006-02-26 21:46:52 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Oh [censored], I'm sorry. What a pitiful thing to realize. Going home, I always thought that it would be a great moment, full of respect and wonder, but it isn't is it? To people that have sad lives, it is still just that, sad. I go home now, to my valley and I find a shabby old shack, overgrown with fleas and vermin. I find salt on the floor. I find, that I still want to leave. Or not. Mostly, I want it to be wonderful. Like it could be. Oh god, I don't want to think about it. WHat a lovely thing you have written, took me back to my home, and there I was standing there in this little white box, and I was watching everything, and I just saw how [censored]ty it really is. And I think herion would be much the same. But I wouldn't do herion. Because I have a terribly addictive personality, and I dont want to be in that place.

Pooh.
THanks for taking me home, this was lovely.
| Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
  sweet. i wanna go. haha. that's cool that it affected you so greatly. niiice. [censored] drugs. on with the crazy natural highs. haha. i get like that all the time, which is why i don't do drugs. something as simple as the fact that the sun is out makes people think i'm high cause i'm so how you say chipper. hahah.
| Posted on 2006-02-27 00:00:00 | by graffitijeans | [ Reply to This ]
  I thought you had a great image of the idea, the examples were a good fit. I enjoyed it!

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| Posted on 2006-02-26 00:00:00 | by Candale-Switch | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it alot it was rushy like the effect of heroine , and I loved the wording , the imagery I got from it was amazing, I really liked it though
| Posted on 2006-02-26 00:00:00 | by pasardspandora | [ Reply to This ]

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