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    dots Submission Name: SHATTERED MIRRORdots
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    Author: WhErEaMi
    ASL Info:    16/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 35/38/24
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 678
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    dotsSHATTERED MIRRORdots
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    Shattered Mirror
    Broken face
    So lost now
    I have no place
    Scared of life
    Nowhere to turn
    So fr to go
    A life to learn

    Shattered Mirror
    Tattered dreams
    All alone
    Too hard it seems
    Feel so empty
    Lost inside
    Too much to bear
    I wish i'd died

    Shattered Mirror
    Murdered love
    Dark thought come
    And rise above
    Tears of love
    Heart of pain
    Mess of thoughts
    Maybe insane

    Shattered Mirror
    Loss of life
    Hopes of death
    Constant strife
    Now let go
    Lonely tear
    Empty now
    Wish you were here....




    Submitted on 2006-02-27 14:28:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was my favorite poem i've read so far on the site. it flows very nicely and is just incredible. your amazin hun. also my SN is DontLetGo421 if you wanna talk sometime.

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    | Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]


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