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Submission Name: The New World Order part 2 dots

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Author:	darkness
ASL Info:	19/F/my own world
Elite Ratio:	1.84 - 524/218/40
Words:	128

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	235
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im kinda to sickend of this plot to continue

The New World Order part 2 dots

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Oh, my dear child
what has happened to thy smile
the one which would never fade?

O Indeed it has been lost
never to return again
I fear

This new world order,
How shall it come to be?

its plots
its plans
the work of many centeries
goes unknown

The plot
Is Sickining
creeping ever so slowly

I look at the world differently now

it wears you down
corrupting nations
ruining peace
fuming in the mind

I cannot eat

this plan so disgusting
gory and sick
cruel and deviant
it most definitly shall work

infinite have suffered
millions have cried
turning father against son

and my words are not enough.....

Submitted on 2006-02-27 17:58:53 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i love it darkness, its a true reaction to a real event.

would i possibly be able to tempt you to read another one of my posts and get your reaction,
i think you will like it , its called "Read this and Know too Much"
| Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
  This reminds me of 'The Project for the New American Century' that affirms the project is dedicated to a few fundamental propositions: that American leadership is good both for America and for the world; and that such leadership requires military strength, diplomatic energy and commitment to moral principle.
Scary stuff.
nessie
| Posted on 2006-04-03 00:00:00 | by comradenessie | [ Reply to This ]
  I found this Ok. I think that in some places, the word choice is not as good as it can be. Besides that, I shouldn't be unfair as I have not read the first part of this series. Some parts such as this one are particularly good though:

this plan so disgusting
gory and sick
cruel and deviant
it most definitly shall work

Thanks for sharing

Abbas
| Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
  I reckon you are a Jesus freak? I don't mean this offensive, I just like calling people Jesus freaks cause it sounds so cool.

You sound quite serious in this piece which sort of gives it a grotesque feeling. I could tell you about my own new world order, but we're not much into God because he never speaks to us, so we tend to stick with the mundane. Like I always say when playing chess, may the best win, and that goes for many things.

Lib
| Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by Lostinbeer | [ Reply to This ]
  Dude! This is so true. I bet that it makes every one of the readers think about what is goin on in the worl right now. Not many understand what is happening nor will they ever unless we speak out. You kind of jumped from topic to topic though... but I guess I like it that way because it adds more to the poem. I thought that words could not describe what was going on at this moment but you have proved me wrong once again.

< ItS x NevER x 2 x LaTe 3
| Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]

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