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Strive To Be Me

Author: Kaila Turley
ASL Info:    15/F
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Words: 98
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Strive To Be Me

sometimes i get to thinking,
am i really me,
is this the person that i should be?
i stress so much
i cry to often,
i know tears get me no where,
but when i think thats all i can do.
.... there is something wrong,
i dont know what to feel,
who to be,
i strive to be me!

i must try to keep everyone else happy,
no thinking of myself,
my friends matter more,
but what woudl i be without the decisions i have made?

theres more coming but i g2g

Submitted on 2006-02-27 18:04:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It is very good. You are right, the person you can be is yourself. Always be true to yourself - no matter what.

Very insightful and very good.

| Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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