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Author:	The_Forsaken1
Elite Ratio:	3.01 - 18/25/11
Words:	186

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
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Just want to let eveyone know that I write free so It's all just there on the paper, thats how I type it. Hope you enjoy it and get my meaning. Thanks for Reading from me.

A Vampire's Confessions dots

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I walk through the eyes of a soul that has fallen,
Always remember,
From the few not forgotton,
The lust in the eyes of the souls that bleed,
Cant seem to find the love from my seed,
Can't you tell Im your one last lullaby?
Arn't your sure if your ready to die?
Well, I've walked through the shadows and I know the truth.
Don't belive me ? I have the bite marks to prove,
prove what Im saying is real,
That immortality is nothing compared to the life that it steals.
You say you want what i have to give.
Im thinking you dont know just what poison is.
SO just think next time you aproch the feind that harbers the disease that you hold you last breath for. Holding your key to the lockbox inside your blood.
Do you realize my rant just inst a rave, and that Im trying to turn you from inquisitive to afraid.
Its not that I dont want you near my life.
I just dont want to be there when you wake up ,when you die.

Submitted on 2006-02-27 19:10:04 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Noone can understand but himself... and nobody else. When you try to understand the pain of the person next to you, you actually think of your own pain... when you look into the eyes of somebody... all you see is ... yourself :| We are so alone in this universe, and would we realise it, we'd be much more insane than we already are. Eternity... is really a dangerous notion... that aprouches, I fear... and the understanding of it - is the stigma of our generation.
| Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by Non-Sens-Uality | [ Reply to This ]
  that poem is beautiful! its like a story. I really liked it even tho u spelled a couple words wrong! but thats the beauty of it!
| Posted on 2006-03-22 00:00:00 | by emb_er77 | [ Reply to This ]
  wow this made my heart beat faster through every line...its very mysterous...i think the title says alot with out it you wouldent kno what is going on...its very awesome, i love it its one of my favorites!
| Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by stateXofXmind | [ Reply to This ]
  Beautiful write. The emotion was thick on every line, and so true as well. I really would expect nothing less from you. As we have much inspiration through these centuries. The words, "from inquisitive to afraid" are my favorite. They explain themselves very well. The last line was tragically beautiful, my favorite kind. It is sad, with a touch of longing it seems. Like trying to keep the ones you love away from the pain that awaits them... even though it may not be possible.

Your Beautiful Nightmare,
Lilithe Aislin
| Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by Lilithe_Aislin | [ Reply to This ]
  i truely like this. i think the way you write is cool, because it seems you write things as you want them to be, rather than how they 'should be'. i like the vampire thing, generally because i'm into that, but the way you write seems quite truthful and honest, and i respect that. i'm not going to give you any 'constructive critisism' because i don't think you need any, if you believe this poem is perfect the way it is, then that is great. i like writers/poets who just post things exactly how they think it should be.
| Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by southernswagger | [ Reply to This ]
  One word: gorgeous. I loved every single bit of it. "I have the bite marks to prove,
prove what Im saying is real,
That immortality is nothing compared to the life that it steals."
I felt the emotion... It was exhilerating. Amazing.
| Posted on 2006-02-27 00:00:00 | by Cynder Moon | [ Reply to This ]

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