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    dots Submission Name: neverdots
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    Author: WhErEaMi
    ASL Info:    16/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 35/38/24
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 845
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    Bytes: 312



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    dotsneverdots
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    1 life to lose
    1 deathto live

    1 drug to take
    1 baby to make

    1 broken hear
    1un none life

    1 tear left to cry
    1 more shattered dream

    you think you know me
    you think you ynderstand me
    you will NEVER




    Submitted on 2006-02-28 13:36:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love it! the only thing that i didnt like about it was...

    "1 broken hear
    1un none life"

    i didnt really understand that. maybe its just me because i'm a lil slow sumtimes (haha) but i liked it because i can relate and its written well overall...good job!

    -me
    | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by sussysabaslice | [ Reply to This ]
      this had a lot of emotion..i didn't really get the meaning ..but for some reason i feel like i can relate..it was really original and i could tell you were feeling it..i like the ending it was great..the flow was really good too..i loved it

    -lucy-
    | Posted on 2006-03-15 00:00:00 | by rainbowXrazors | [ Reply to This ]


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