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    dots Submission Name: Skinwalkersdots
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    Author: Skinwalker
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 36/57/28
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Based on a Native American myth about animals who came and stole humans away, devoured them, and took their skin. They stole the skin for the "wolf in sheep clothing" effect, and stole more humans...in layman's terms...shapechangers.


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    We come from the mountains
    we come from the forests
    in your kind's flesh.
    We come to feast
    we come to take
    you and your beautiful flesh.
    We scream at the night sky
    we howl at the moon high
    the time to feast is nigh.
    We tear your skin
    we swallow you whole
    we use your bones to make our bowls.
    The crackling of flesh on our feast fires
    the splintering of bones being crushed
    the taste of your clean wholesome flesh.
    Your screams of fear
    your screams of hate
    your screams of pain.
    We hunt on wings, legs, and paws
    we hunt with talons, fangs, and claws
    we hunt on two legs with spear and arrows.
    We will take you.
    We will take your kin.
    We will take your skin.




    Submitted on 2004-05-02 16:49:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I also read & understand that a lot of Navajos believe that Coyotes are actually skinwalkers & with a friend once one crossed our path & we had to seek an alternative route!
    This is menacing & it's interesting a lot of their customs & beliefs and how they came about!
    This was well written & makes one feel the little hairs on arms stand at attention!
    Love,Peace,Joy&Smiles 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-01-10 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Personally, I've always had a difficult time writting thing like this. I can feel a menecing sence of urgency in the tone of this one. I hear and feel tribal drums. It's strange. Very dark.
    | Posted on 2004-05-02 00:00:00 | by Casper | [ Reply to This ]


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