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    dots Submission Name: who are those men?dots
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    Author: elva
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 21/19/9
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       nothin 2 say its kind of a shitty poem


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    dotswho are those men?dots
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    who are those men who walk our village?
    i herd the blacksmith ask,
    the ones with robes of night and ebony,
    they all wear anguished masks.

    who are those men who raid our village?
    i heard my neibour cry,
    the ones who stole our stole our daily bread,
    and fled, unpunished by.

    who are those men who attack our village?
    i heard a young child sob,
    they took my my mum and dad ,
    they slayed them , just to hear ,their hearts last final throb

    who are those men they all ask,
    they walk a twisted path,
    and many lives that met their end to the cruel music of their laugh




    Submitted on 2006-02-28 15:17:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was good and would make a great story
    i do hope you are thinking of continuing it

    i like the concept of anguished masks and dark robes kinds reminds me of the monks a little

    well done
    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]



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