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    dots Submission Name: Boygirl Royaltydots
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    Author: Von Django
    ASL Info:    32/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 119/148/32
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 195
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    dotsBoygirl Royaltydots
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    Testing the waters of etiquette
    With tentative prose
    Tender and meaningless
    About that velvet slasher
    A shameless crossdresser
    Who you say
    Would leave one dry
    Dissecting your sunday-best dress
    And wearing down that perfect acid stare
    You copied from Twiggy or Hepburn
    So very well
    Changing subject to say
    Why everyone around town
    Tastes like you
    Or not
    As etiquette demands




    Submitted on 2006-02-28 16:33:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey, you're back! And in great form, what a biting little piece.

    You really need to read this a few times to pick up all the innuendo and daggers in here, simply excellent for a pick at society.

    Just as I remember, excellent work, and enjoyable reading

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this write
    I liked the inclussion of Twiggy
    I had the privelage of meeting her about 12 tears ago in NY and got her autograph
    She is really a nice lady
    Loved this
    Great Write
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      love this. i was wary at first, thinking i was going to have to read another rhyming poem, so thank you for..that. it's an interesting sort of subject, and the punctuation is all i can really think to improve upon (there is none).
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by radiatorhums | [ Reply to This ]
      haha, i enjoyed this poem. I was referred by my best friend, InsatiateDelialah, and I was not disapointed. You have a way with words. It sounds so original and bold. I like the rhythm, it flows neatly, w/ some spunk. Please, keep writing, Peace,
    Minsu
    | Posted on 2006-03-04 00:00:00 | by Lee Minsu | [ Reply to This ]



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