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    dots Submission Name: Shes always theredots
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    Author: LostInYerTears
    ASL Info:    14/F/Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 85/86/32
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       dedicated to the one always there.


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    dotsShes always theredots
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    shes the one who understands me
    shes the one im most alike
    and shes the one i'll never be

    shes always there
    when i need her
    and she'll always care

    she cant speak
    but she truly listens
    when i've fallen weak

    she's playful and fun
    but like me
    she hates the sun

    she knows my heart
    and how much pain
    has torn it apart

    she's the one i'll always keep
    and shes the one
    protecting me as i sleep

    i love my girl
    shes the most important thing
    in this world

    she understands me
    not a human or toy
    just someone who can see

    a doll or an imaginary friend?
    perhapes
    but she'l be there till the end

    she sleeps in my bed
    resting on my pillow
    all except her head

    which rests on mine
    not a human
    but a cat
    thats there for me all the time




    Submitted on 2006-02-28 18:13:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Split personality...dang typos...lol...had to take up room here just to correct a mistake...:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):
    :):):):):):):):):):):):):)hopefully you knew what i meant anyways
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by TastemyTears | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really nice...I can understand this ALOT! I used to have a wolf that I always thought would always be there...and he was until I lost it...but know that this doesn't mean your insane...*smiles* Take care of her...
    Great write,keep it up!

    -Always,
    Leo
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by GuardianAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, At first I thought maybe you was talking slit personality here. about your self... Completly threw me off...Im not going to say I didnt like it but Im not gonna say I did..Then agian everyones writes come from somewhere deep inside I think..Anyways I LOVE CATS!..lol
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by TastemyTears | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful
    I mean beautiful
    My best friend in the whole world is my cat Dennis The Menace
    He is always there for me no matter what
    I really loved this
    A couple of my poems are dealing with Dennis my Cat and how his love has saved my life
    This one is a favorite
    Excellent work!
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      *CRIES* that is awesome...my best friend is my dog...idk where I would be without him...He is there, always...Keep up the good work...
    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by Gefangen | [ Reply to This ]



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