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    dots Submission Name: Youdots
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    Author: The_Forsaken1
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 18/25/11
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 232
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1079



    Description:
       I talk from time to time to Amy Lee of Evanescence. This is one of her unreleased songs. Please note that is is personal so try not to broadcast it all over the net, Try to keep it elite skills bound. This is done with piano only.


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    dotsYoudots
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    The words have been drained from this pencil,
    sweet words that I need to give you.
    and I cant sleep,
    I need to tell you,
    goodnight.

    When were together I feel perfect
    And when Im pulled away from you I,
    Fall apart.
    All you say is sacred to me,
    Your eyes are so blue
    I cant look away,
    As we lay here in the stillness,
    you whisper to me

    Amy, merry me, promise you'll stay with me,
    Oh you dont have to ask me.
    You know your all that I live for,
    You know Id die just to hold you,
    stay with you,
    Some how I'll show you,
    that you are my,
    Night sky,
    I've always been right behind you.
    Now i'll always be right beside you.

    (piano solo)

    (down tempo) So many nights,
    I've cried myself to sleep.
    but now that you love me I,
    love my self.
    I never thought I would say that....
    I never thought there'd be...
    You (6 beats)




    Submitted on 2006-02-28 18:25:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This write seems vaguely familiar. (^_~) I really love it. It just has beautiful wording and flow. And it seems to really mean something. I'm a very good reader you know. The circumstance confuses me, as many things are confusing right now. Howver, as I've said before, I may find the answers in due time. I anticipate the release of this song.

    Forever,
    Lilithe
    | Posted on 2006-02-28 00:00:00 | by Lilithe_Aislin | [ Reply to This ]



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