A moment in time
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These are poems that me and jon both wrote toghether and I had to filanly except that he waz gone before i put them on here
Jon wrote Angle of Music for me and
I wrote Promise me while listening to Phantom of the opera sound track so alot of wrods came from there
hope that you read these as an offering of my soul and of
my signifing that Jon is gone and I can't do anything about it DAM IT ALL ANY HOW I would sell my soul to have Jon back here with me right now.
sorry this is so long it turnned into a journal instead of a description
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Jon wrote Angle of Music for me and
I wrote Promise me while listening to Phantom of the opera sound track so alot of wrods came from there
hope that you read these as an offering of my soul and of
my signifing that Jon is gone and I can't do anything about it DAM IT ALL ANY HOW I would sell my soul to have Jon back here with me right now.
sorry this is so long it turnned into a journal instead of a description
ttul
storm
A moment in time
A moment in time a poetry story by stromkrow A moment in time worth remmbering is my First kiss with Jon My last kiss with Jon watching Jon leave singing with Jon and his family for a concert Jon calling me and asking me if i wanted to come up for the summer and Jon calling me his Angel of Music for the first time Angel of Music Your voice is like an angel you are my angel sing for me my angel of music don't be afraid to show every one your talent little one Let your vioce take you were I can not I miss you my angel of music I miss the way your songs put me to sleep I miss the way your lips felt against my forehead as I fell asleep I hope you have good melodys now and forever Promise me that you'll share you talent with me forever Promise me you'll try Let me be your light with you right beside me In a world of everlasting night Love me that is all I ask of you Any were you go I will go to I gave you your music to make yor song take flight and this is how you repay me deny me and betray me He waz bound to love you when he heard you sing Now I wish that i had never given you my music But what can I say Nothing lasts forever I love you but I will let you go if needs be Take wing my angel and fly But Promise me you'll rembember me and the good times Rembember me in the times you are board Angel your hands are cold your face is as white as a ghost What are you afraid of my Angel so fair and so tender |
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This is a neat way of writing a story/poem. The first thing it reminded me of was Phantom of the Opera. The use of wording and the flow presented me that image. This is a beautiful yet painful story. I like it.| | Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ] | ohhhh..so sad...to me... | i liked this so much so "First kiss with Jon My last kiss with Jon watching Jon leave" This is your best piece by far..so full of emotion i hope to see more of this work from you Swanne | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ] | |
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