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    Author: Psychohenry32
    ASL Info:    1638/Femail/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 22/33/24
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 143
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 650



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       I wrote this for a friend


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    Why do I try
    To hide the tears that I cry?
    THe pain deep down inside
    All I do is try to hide.
    Why can't anybody see
    I'm just trying to be me.

    I want to find the light,
    Tell me this will be alright.
    All the things you've said,
    Made me wish I was dead.
    I just want an answer,
    Why is being with you like having cancer?

    I have lost my will to fight
    So instead I just take flight,
    And soar up above
    With the white, white dove.
    And when I find the strength to try
    I'll show you what it;s like to try.




    Submitted on 2006-03-01 15:19:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your poem is a poem that i need 2 give to my ex. Its so very true. I like your stanzas. Keep writing I wanna hear more. It could've been longer but that lengths good enough, 2.
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by Msangel | [ Reply to This ]



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