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    dots Submission Name: Untitled Dreamdots
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    Author: Desser
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 89/95/44
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/
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       I actually have these dreams.


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    dotsUntitled Dreamdots
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    "It's a dream, I know, but..."

    "No buts. It's not possible."

    "But it felt so real."

    "It was just a dream."

    "But dreams can be real,
    if you want them to be."

    "Do you want this dream to be real?"

    "At times, yes.
    I know it's difficult to understand,
    but when I do want it to happen,
    I want it badly.
    So badly,
    I can't stop looking at the sky."

    "You look to the sky?
    Why?"

    "I hope to see Him."

    "You hope to see Him?"

    "Yes. I hope he'd show up,
    glowing in the sky.
    His hands outstretched,
    his eyes abroad,
    looking for his people."

    "His people? Are you one of them?"

    "Yes."

    "And so you said in your dream,
    the one you want to happen,
    that He comes and takes His people,
    takes them from this place,
    to the above,
    to heaven?"

    "Yes."

    "You've drempt about this?"

    "Several times,
    but I'm sure my dream
    is nothing like the real thing."

    "And so what is your dreams
    of this ordeal
    telling you?"

    "I've had them repeatedly.
    Usually, that tells me
    something is accurate about it.
    What, I'm not sure."

    "Any guesses?"

    "One... the time is close.
    Very close."




    Submitted on 2006-03-01 15:24:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this reminds me so much of Mellenium or X-files, it sickened me. PErsonal sickness aside, thius was pretty original. 4 stars. Though, I might add that you don't tell other ppl about these dreams that know you...(they might think you're the messiah)

    Storm
    | Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ]
      I am semi unsure of how I feel about this. I was somewhere between bored and confusion...Well I mean not confused as far as the content goes. I mean, if you have such an astounding revelation then I would do it justice by creating a good piece of literature, not a staunch piece of dialouge.
    | Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by beldolore | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this poem very much im glad you wrote it ty im also glad some one else wrote about god and not about killin or slashing them selves
    | Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by Darcey D | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't really know what to say about this poem, except that it was good, and it was interesting. Reading the last comment posted, yeah, it does sort of remind me of the X-Files. I really like that show too. But back to the poem, my interpretation of it is that it is a future event that is going to happen, and you are among a group of people next to go.

    Wow, and I thought my dreams were a little out of the ordinary.
    | Posted on 2006-06-20 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]



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